Making A Film - Need Some Advice.
Tuesday August 22, @07:40AM, by David Maverick
Subject : General
Summary :

Making of a movie, The Movie is Its About an boy who does not have nothing going for him, His hobby was fixing things that didn't work or was broken he had no friends no life he had nothing going for him UNTIL he fixed this laptop. What he didn't know everything he typed came true.

All he wants is a life like a normal person does insted of doing the same boring no good day he usully is putting up with his hard life he has had. He Visitis the world war 2 he travels back in time because thats what he typed in,

Before the computer Lets him type anything it says, Becare What You Type For.

I am wanting help on how to make this better and how 2 add more stuff in make it good,

i want abit of

action, comedy, romance,

I am also needing sum good names I have fort of.

Bewear what you Type. or The Laptop

so if you all could be kind and tell me if you like it.

if you like it tell me what i can add in if u dont like it tell me what i cud do to change it to make it better.

ok thank you from Mr.David.Maverick